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19 Example 3

# Six Sentence Argument Score Review Comments
1 Bilmar deforestation for palm oil sourcing can have a huge impact on the Duolever’s reputation.
2 Duolever should use its position to force Bilmar to stop deforestation for palm oil production.
3 The perpetration of buying palm oil from unsustainable source could result in a loss of credibility and reputation.
4 As the chair member of the RSPO, Duolever is firmly committed to stop rainforest destruction due to palm oil sourcing.
5 However, if Bilmar does not commit to source sustainably, it may be difficult to find other reliable supplier.
6 In conclusion, Duolever commitment to the sustainable cause seems to be a winning strategy in the long run.
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