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15 Example 1

# Six Sentence Argument Score Review Comments
1 Over 6,000 letters urge Duolever to protect Nigeria’s forests by buying no more palm oil from Bilmar, our largest supplier.
2 We should respond by immediately stop buying Nigerian palm oil and by pressuring Bilmar to halt their plans in Nigeria.
3 Any other reaction will damage our reputation persistently and let our Strategy for Sustainability appear as an empty promise.
4 However, we would risk losing our most important and shortly irreplaceable supplier of RSPO-certified palm oil.
5 Since without us, Bilmar could not sell large portions of their produced palm oil, the aforementioned risk is manageable.
6 To protect our good reputation, we should stop sourcing Nigeria palm oil from Bilmar until they have improved.

 

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