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17 Example 2

# Six Sentence Argument Score Review Comments
1 The Nigerian forest of Cross River State is being deforested by Bilmar, one of our key suppliers for palm oil.
2 Duolever made a commitment to buy 100% certified sustainable palm oil by 2015 and expends effort to achieve this goal
3 As a founding member of RSPO, Duolever is working to make the palm oil production environmentally sustainable

 

4 Critics may question Bilmar’s willingness to change their behavior, due to their power by controlling 45% of the market

 

5 Duolever, one of the largest palm oil buyers, can force Bilmar to produce according to the sustainability criteria
6 Duolever should intensify its efforts to make the palm oil production sustainable by using their power on the RSPO
Overall Score and Assessment:

 

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