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1 | The Nigerian forest of Cross River State is being deforested by Bilmar, one of our key suppliers for palm oil. | ||
2 | Duolever made a commitment to buy 100% certified sustainable palm oil by 2015 and expends effort to achieve this goal | ||
3 | As a founding member of RSPO, Duolever is working to make the palm oil production environmentally sustainable
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4 | Critics may question Bilmar’s willingness to change their behavior, due to their power by controlling 45% of the market
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5 | Duolever, one of the largest palm oil buyers, can force Bilmar to produce according to the sustainability criteria | ||
6 | Duolever should intensify its efforts to make the palm oil production sustainable by using their power on the RSPO | ||
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